Week 6- Online lesson plan task 1- Precise and Concise writing exercise

Assignment 1: Online Lesson Plan task- Precise and Concise writing exercise:

1.     Most students check their emails on a daily basis.  (Concise)

·       Most students check their emails regularly

2.     Students are going to experience a change next semester.  (Precise)

·       Students will be facing new set of challenges next semester

3.     In order to facilitate the process for students to create their timetables, students will be allowed to practice and learn the process with a trainer in a computer lab during orientation.  (Concise and Precise)

·       Students will be given an opportunity to practice and learn the process with a trainer in a computer lab during the orientation, to create their timetables.

4.     The worker whom I work with at the same company who sits next to me has transmitted an electronic invitation inviting all members of our department to convene at the establishment that serves caffeinated beverages after the end of our day of employment.  (Concise and Precise)

·       My colleague who sits next to me, has sent an invitation to everyone from our department to celebrate his birthday at the coffee shop after office hours.